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Ray 4 80.00%
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Old 12-12-2007, 08:55 AM Offline   #1 (permalink)



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ok, here it just me and ray nobody else steps in you can leave comments if you want not challenges.
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Old 12-12-2007, 09:08 AM Offline   #2 (permalink)

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ray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to thingsray is gettin used to things
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let me school markaile reel quick

yah wanted to see us battle and dats wats yah gonna get
it aint gonna be long, cuz it will be ova once i spit
he didnt call me out, i called him
jus to show yah niggas i got more wisdom
he havelock, and im new bern
home of craven terrace, where niggas gettin shot whereva u turn
havelock country, new bern city
which one would u rather be
we still gonna be kool after dis, i hope
cuz markaile, u already kno
that i aint no joke
like i said u doin ur little thing, but im doin it big
cuz u iz not ready for Da Kidd
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iight i spit somthin real quick

you already kno
yo boi got that iceman flow
imma beast when it cum to dis
like KFC how u want your chicken crisp
u can’t handle it, cuz its so hot
but this is my block up in havlock
and im flying wit dis like a bird
that ran up and shot dead, now u layin on da curb
there no cure for new bern
but, like the flame bear
let it flare, in the air
cuz Hitown niggaz don’t care
we hit ya boi wit life aint fair
cuz we don't share
and we don't make rips
we staright tear
wannbe crips
to death
nutin left.
MLD
thats all i can do right now
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nigga let me smoke u reel quick
dnt come with that havelock shit
b4 u come at me, get off wayne's dick
talkin bout some KFC
u wont be able to eat
after new bern fill ur chest with that heat
i see y Hitown dnt care
cuz the niggas there dnt go no where
niggas didnt win more than one football game this year
new bern embarrassed yah, the fans didnt even want to chear
nigga we da state champion of NC
so come talk to me after yah loosin streak
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Old 12-12-2007, 09:32 AM   #5 (permalink)

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hold up... official battle or not... ?

im gonna let the votes slide since there isnt many up yet...

but... its supposed to be one verse each...

Coliseum Rules / Voting Method - ALL READ

unless ya'll just fuckin around.. at which point its gotta go in the freestyle section

let me kno whats good
 
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iight this backfire

talking like dat will get yo back craked
in side out, like i threw out , you're not intact
if u go on msn u'll see u have no contacts
and if ya mama tell then she messed up the contract
about sucking my dick. front and back
while we were chilling in the cadilac
i kno im youg but a young nigga like me need no slack.

another shortie. i got all day
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Old 12-12-2007, 09:54 AM Offline   #7 (permalink)



 
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Originally Posted by markaile View Post
like KFC how u want your chicken crisp
wt...........f?



& to Krome- yeah, BOTH dudes did get out of line w/ "the rules".
No votes from either- and Mark edited his post.
Then Ray threw out another verse.
So......

But, I'm guessin' it was a official battle tho'.
So, I'm voting for Ray (not counting the second verse-- )
Just the first one from each dude...

Originally Posted by ray
yah wanted to see us battle and dats wats yah gonna get
it aint gonna be long, cuz it will be ova once i spit

blahhh .. 2/5 (alright openner)

he didnt call me out, i called him
jus to show yah niggas i got more wisdom

the first line may have been true-- but
i can't rock with the whole tryna rhyme "him", and "wisDOM" 0/5


he havelock, and im new bern
home of craven terrace, where niggas gettin shot whereva u turn

oooooooooook.. 1/5

havelock country, new bern city
which one would u rather be

neither 0/5

we still gonna be kool after dis, i hope
cuz markaile, u already kno that i aint no joke

good sportmanship .. 2/5


like i said u doin ur little thing, but im doin it big
cuz u iz not ready for Da Kidd

i can't rock wit the "cuz u iz not" line lol 1/5

5 / 30

Originally Posted by markaile
you already kno
yo boi got that iceman flow
imma beast when it cum to dis
like KFC how u want your chicken crisp
u canít handle it, cuz its so hot
but this is my block up in havlock
and im flying wit dis like a bird
that ran up and shot dead, now u layin on da curb
there no cure for new bern
but, like the flame bear
let it flare, in the air
cuz Hitown niggaz donít care
we hit ya boi wit life aint fair
cuz we don't share
and we don't make rips
we staright tear
wannbe crips
to death
nutin left.
MLD
thats all i can do right now

Mannn-- I wanna be fair with this, and break ur verse down too.. But, honestly.. I don't feel like it. You could probably consider the flow of it to be alright-- (rhyming-- bear, air, care, fair, share- etc). You get a creative point for that-- but.. at the same time.. Once you break the verse down and actually pay attention to it-- it's like BLAH-- be original. Drop a punchline- use a personal-- say dudes name in it, or something..

Plus-- if I could deduct points from the battle-- I'd take a big percentage for that "chicken line".. ; Yeah, it WAS funny as hell- but.. it made no sense at all, and didn't hold any relevance.

My vote goes to ray--

Y'all should battle again-- soon.
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Old 12-12-2007, 10:49 AM   #8 (permalink)

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Originally Posted by ray View Post
let me school markaile reel quick

yah wanted to see us battle and dats wats yah gonna get
it aint gonna be long, cuz it will be ova once i spit

Yea... decent...but nothin special

he didnt call me out, i called him
jus to show yah niggas i got more wisdom

I can get that rhymin... line better then first IMO... decent attack...

he havelock, and im new bern
home of craven terrace, where niggas gettin shot whereva u turn

meh...

havelock country, new bern city
which one would u rather be

meh...

we still gonna be kool after dis, i hope
cuz markaile, u already kno
that i aint no joke

compliment without a strong follow up diss.. makes it seem too nice..

like i said u doin ur little thing, but im doin it big
cuz u iz not ready for Da Kidd

yezzir...
Originally Posted by markaile View Post
you already kno
yo boi got that iceman flow

nice flow an punches together win the battles

imma beast when it cum to dis
like KFC how u want your chicken crisp

lol... this ones alrite... crisp..

u canít handle it, cuz its so hot
but this is my block up in havlock
and im flying wit dis like a bird
that ran up and shot dead, now u layin on da curb
there no cure for new bern
but, like the flame bear
let it flare, in the air
cuz Hitown niggaz donít care
we hit ya boi wit life aint fair
cuz we don't share
and we don't make rips
we staright tear
wannbe crips
to death
nutin left.

i stopped the eval... you comin with a flow.. an minor minor punches. but nuthin direct... nuthin that we know you goin at em... is he a wannabe crip or is that just about the area you live in...
hmm..

this ones hard cuz both weren't goin hard at each other directly...

ray gotta get my vote... at least he had some more punches...

it was more obvious that it was written against markaille then marks was..

good battle from two beginners though...
 
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ok I appricate the advice. yea about it being a offical we did kinda bend the rules aliitle bit. nextime it won't be like that. my mistake. i forgot about reading the rules i was in hurry to get i had to do my project
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naw they anint no crips around hear i was just ryming.

and i thought that kfc thang was funny
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