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April 2nd, 2011 at 9:35 pm

The guide to nicki minaj type rhymes.



You’re Nicki Minaj (or any Young Money rapper) and you have to write a 16-bar verse in 5 minutes.



Simple.



You’re writing 16 lines, so that’s 4 rhyme series.



Lines 1-4: Rhyme Series A, 5-8: Rhyme Series B, 9-12: Rhyme Series C, 13-16: Rhyme Series D



Now the good thing about this is that your rhymes can be really simple because you’re Nicki Minaj.



You might notice that the rhymes I use in this tutorial aren’t simple enough for Nicki Minaj.



Let’s do A first.



Step 1: Think of 4 things that rhyme. They don’t have to relate to each other. List them all:



Go to bed

Overfed

Loaf of bread

Motorhead



Step 2: Place a phrase before each rhyme that links with it.



Now these rhymes have nothing to do with each other but we can link them together poorly (because we’re Nicki Minaj) with some boasting cliches. Let’s start with “go to bed”:



N*ggas always sleep on me… go to bed



Now for “overfed.” Ah, that’s to do with eating, so we can recall another boasting cliche: being hungry.



No one as hungry in this game… overfed



Now “loaf of bread.” How can “loaf of bread” be turned into a boasting cliche? Ah, bread is made of dough. Nicki Minaj is known for witlessly boasting about her money (see: Monster).



N*ggas know I got the dough… loaf of bread



Now “motorhead.” Well, she’s bragging about money… may as well brag about cars. “Coat of red” could work as an internal rhyme.



Coat of red on the rims… motorhead



Yes, it really is as simple as that. Just pause after the phrase, and say the rhyme. The antecedent phrase is there to confuse listeners into thinking it’s well thought-out.



Here are the 4 lines in all their glory:



N*ggas always sleep on me, go to bed

No one as hungry in this game, overfed

N*ggas know I got the dough, loaf of bread

Coat of red on the rims, motorhead



There’s a quick tutorial on how to quickly write 4 Nicki Minaj bars. Just repeat that process 3 more times and you have a verse written in under 5 minutes. I call it the “Young Money Method.”



You can see Nicki Minaj applying this formula in her Roman’s Revenge verse:



4 rhymes:



Cacklin’

Panickin’

Vatican

Mannequin



Link them together with boasting phrases and then have a pause before the rhyme.



4 rhymes:



Overnight

Overwrite

Motorbike

Overbite



Link them together with boasting phrases and then have a pause before the rhyme.



You can also see Drake applying this formula in his “Forever” verse:



Nino

Nemo

Chemo
don't know who wrote this but it is jokes... simple ass rhyme scheme...
who's gettin this started...

**drops beat*

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Lets see
*picks four words that rhyme together*
Lost
Cross
Moss
Nos

Thinks of something antecedent that leaves people amazed

Look before you step into the street, cross
My team will seperate your body from its spleen, lost
Cause we keep money in our hand, Moss
Take off quicker than you can say, Nos

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excedrin
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i know this football player named edwin
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if your girl gets outta line...beat
your girl tell me I'm sweet...treat
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Originally Posted by Slim View Post
I am the opposite of sloppy...neat
if your girl gets outta line...beat
your girl tell me I'm sweet...treat
she come home to you, how I taste?...skeet
my verse fresher than the year old shoes on your feet
with more pauses than a speed bump on your street
your breath like a snowball deposit...sleet
my verse xxl///your shit is petite

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run thru girls like marlboros...vice
they come more than once...thrice
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you like an office token...darryl
broke as a joke you owen...terrrell
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my girls favorite type of undies? lace
you far from Mr. T...Face
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