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Old 02-08-2006, 06:33 PM Offline   #2 (permalink)



 
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I'm Feeling The Color Effect....

Everything Seems Well and Crack Till I Look At The Female Cut,Kind Of Ruff Around Here Arm.Try Dealing With That and Things Should Be Okay

and The Text....Try Make It Larger and Viewable For The People,I Can Barely See What It Says But Overall This Is A Nice Style.Remind Of A Clothing Ad Of Some Kind.
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Old 02-08-2006, 06:51 PM Offline   #3 (permalink)



 
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Love everything except for the text next to the woman and the bird. I think if you fix or take those out it'll look alot better.
 
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Old 02-08-2006, 09:11 PM Offline   #4 (permalink)



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yeah the text next to her needs to be taken out. it's out of place..
the color is coo.. i like the bird and the page torn effect. the chick is not my type of chick but she has nice skin i guess..lol.. now if it was a thick gurl then we could talk


i was getting use to that spider though. lol..
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Old 02-10-2006, 05:33 AM Offline   #5 (permalink)



 
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You might wanna take off the drop shadow you gave on beyonce, because i think the goal is to make it seem as 1 whole picture.

The Dove should be smaller, about half its size, and more to the left.

the text that you have curved, should be straight and put on the empty space that you filled in with the pink in big, capitilzed letter in a calligraphy type script.

and the stroke around the pink shouldnt be that color more, whitest pink color

but it looks good
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